This week I presented my presentation and my feedback was that I should think more about why the colours are used such as their connotations.
I then analysed the college magazine using the same conventions we used for the other magazines. This is the result: I'm now going to use this analysis to make a better version of the college magazine.
I totally agree with the comments that you have made during this deconstruction, Josh. The product doesn't seem aimed at students and I imagine that maybe parents are the TA for the product. Your comments about the resolution and quality of images is certainly valid and I agree that the cover is very crowded. Hopefully you will use this analysis to really inform the product that you will make. This cover doesn't seem that clear of the generic conventions and this is something that you can improve upon.
I totally agree with the comments that you have made during this deconstruction, Josh. The product doesn't seem aimed at students and I imagine that maybe parents are the TA for the product. Your comments about the resolution and quality of images is certainly valid and I agree that the cover is very crowded. Hopefully you will use this analysis to really inform the product that you will make. This cover doesn't seem that clear of the generic conventions and this is something that you can improve upon.
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